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Monday, 22 June 2015

Broom broom beep beep, murmur my “dad everybody hop in the car “ wait my mum said i'll be there soon!!” replied my mum”once my mum was finish off we went.

t was about 4 to 5 o'clock in the morning.and as a speed of lightning in the night sky we went . once we got car we had to wait for a long time until i felt tired and i went to sleep in the car we went early cuse my brother  


2 hours later people came there were  thousands and thousands people  getting ready we stood on the road getting ready to march. from the left quick forward march we marched like our great soldiers  that marched in the the war my brother was the leader marching. in front of the people  
once the marching was finish about a 50 minute walk we were all tired finally we sat down the trupets started

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