MY ACTIVE reflection

my active reflection

walt: Explain how something happen

i'll give myself a halfway thumb

what are finding tricky with your work

i'm finding tricky is my spelling in my writing

my sea turtle lif circlye

Explanational Writing T3 W6  

Your writing task for week 6

WALT: explain how something works

How do you write an explanation of how things work? (What is our success criteria?) needs a title need a planer understandable

Some students at Wesley Primary School would like to know how sea turtles grow into adults. Your mission for today is t0: Use the teacher's planner to write an explanation of how sea turtles grow into adults. Self assess your work against the success criteria

Title: how sea turtles grow into adults

Word list:    percent female turtle will hatch

Your explanation goes here: The sea turtle have been around since the dinosaurs, that is approximately 150 million years! The female sea turtle digs a hole in the sand and lays around 50 - 200 ping pong ball size eggs. Once she has layed her eggs she covers the hole and goes back to the ocean, leaving her eggs alone. After about 6 weeks the eggs will hatch but sadly 20% of the eggs laid will never hatch. the sea turtle babies are as big as your palm of your hand as they are wandering on to the beach to safety they have to face strong predators like carbs seagulls and many more like rubbish but sadly 50% percent never make it. once the babies reach the sea they look for hiding places like seaweed and again they have to face strong predators including whales destroyable waves and sharks and rubbish Female turtle starts breeding a 20 years old  so they have to crawl back up to the beach and start laying eggs but only 2 can lay eggs some adult live up to 80 years.Write a sentence about how the sea turtle life cycle starts again.and the the life cycle starts all over again

Extension task: Film yourself giving your explanation of how sea turtles grow into adults and blog it.

Self Assessment SC 1: Title SC 2: Write about each section of the plan SC 3: Use words from our word list

my comment to joeseph mafiti

my comments to other people bloggssss

this is what i feel like about my instucthional writing 

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=youtube

instucthion writing

1.Connect to wifi

2.Go to youtube

3.Search the video you want to watch

4.go down to the url and push ctrl c and above the url there will be a blogger sign

5.When you click on it the blogger  video will come on then you put a title then you're finished

Instructional Writing T3 W3  

Tuesday

WALT: Write clear and easy to understand instructions

How do you write clear and easy to understand instructions: (What is our success criteria?) Sequence the steps and diagrams/pictures Use precise vocabulary(words that make sense) List of materials

Some classes in the Ako Hiko cluster need help with embedding videos and google docs into their blog posts. Your mission for today is t0: write a clear set of instructions explaining how to embed a youtube video into a blogpost. Self assess your work against the success criteria

Title:How to embed a youtube video

List of equipment:Laptop,youtube open,Blogger,Wifi,Hands

Your instructions go here: 1.Connect to wifi 2.Go to youtube 3.Search the video you want to watch 4.go down to the url and push ctrl c and above the url there will be a blogger sign 5.When you click on it the video will come on then you put a title then you're finished

Self Assessment SC 1: Title ✓✓✓ SC 2: List of Equipment ✓✓✓ SC 3: Use clear instructions that explain exactly what to do √ SC 4: Use Precise vocabulary ✓

Extension task: Add screen shots for each step of your instructions

MY IN SINTRUCTHIONS FOR MAKING A MAGIC TRICK

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aESHTx8bymkSAf1vy9dV7Y3EQkOo2BrGqEeDcBg1jeg/edi